T-Free's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Halindir - October Winds]

Nice!

I like the different melodies and chords used in this piece, especially how it changes in the end of the second minute. What I think could be improved is, that you try to add more structure and variation into the whole song. I have the feeling that everything runs always in the same rythm like: ||.ii.ii.||.ii.ii.||.ii.ii.||.ii.ii.
Try to take out one of the instruments at a few points to make the song more interesting and adventurous like (for example): ||.ii.ii.i.ii.ii.i.ii.ii.||.ii.ii.
I know it's a bit hard to show but I hope you get what I mean, the instruments do not have to always play in the same rythm as long as your song is. The rest is really nice, keep it up! :)
8/10 | 4/5

Halindir responds:

Thank you very much T-Free!
Took some time to decipher what you meant, but I think I get it.

You feedback is appreciated :)

[Dj Sundivie-no Limit (electro)]

Good!

Very enjoyable piece you have here, I like the drums and overall pace of the track. Just something you could improve would be that you work a little on the high synth sounds, like the one from 0:18-0:29 is a bit too loud and sounds too sharp for the rest of the song. Also the high-pitched melody gets really repetitive after a while. Try to better choose only certain parts of the song to play that synth. Furthermore it's a bit too loud for the main track, which steals the dominance of the bass sound. Other than that points, nice work! Keep it up!
8/10 | 4/5

[~M~ Orchestral Demo #1]

Klasse!

Die Stimmung, die das Stück übermittelt ist so, unbekümmert, sorgenfrei und einfach total relaxed. Mir gefällt alles, vor allem aber auch die FX'ale Unterstütung der Atmosphäre durch das Vogelgezqwitscher. :D
Instrumental kann ich dir auch nichts an Kritik bieten, außer vielleicht dass du noch etwas dramatischer werden könntest mit den orchestralen Drums, damit's ein bisschen mehr "pumpt", zumindest evtl. in einem kleinen Teil in dem Lied. Aber das auch nur so am Rande, sonst ist alles perfekt und ausgeglichen. Weiter so! :D
10/10 | 5/5

[ETERNAL DREAMS]

Yum!

I like! Gute Arbeit ;D
10/10 | 5/5

Caine1989 responds:

Freut mich dass du es likest. Wäre eigentlich besser geworden, aber FL is wiedermal gecrasht und ich hab darurch ne halbe stunde arbeit verloren. :/

[|-Criminal Mind-|]

Yay :)

You know my opinion about this song. Stunning work, keep it up!!
10/10 | 5/5

O-Prime125 responds:

Yes I do :p, thank you!

[Manuel S. - Time To Be(Demo)]

Heeey :D

Hmhmhm......hm... xD
Also soweit kann ich eigentlich nichts kritisieren, außer wie meine Vorredner schon meinten, dass unter anderm das Piano etwas abwechslungsreicher klingen könnte. Aber soweit richtig nice gemixt, mir gefällt, dass du immer melodischer mit deinen Projekten wirst, genau wie ich's liebe. :D
Und auch die Drums, jajaja einfach nur... weiter so! Sehr professionell :)
Geh mit dem Lied ruhig noch weiter und mach 'nen richtig fetten Mainpart rein mit dreckigem Bass und starken, evtl. verrückten Synths. ;D
10/10 | 5/5

[~M~ A Caribbean Side Trip]

Herrlich!

Hab das jetzt schon 'ne halbe Stunde am loopen, sehr harmonisch und einfach toll. Sehr guter Einsatz der Steel drums! Weiter so.
10/10 | 5/5

PatrickMueller responds:

hey!
freut mich echt sehr zu hören! ich geb weiterhin mein bestes, wenn denn ideen da sind ;)
greetz, Patrick

[|-Get On This-|]

Whoa!

Yay great beat mean, you're getting better and better! Love the violins and the different melody changes. Nothing I could criticize, Keep it up!
10/10 | 5/5

O-Prime125 responds:

Thank you lots bro, appreciate it! :)

[|-Resurrection-|]

Kewl!

Great one man, really like that dynamic synth that starts at about one minute. I can fully agree with Murphy, the strings are a bit loud and high on this but that's all I can critizice. Keep at it bro!
10/10 | 5/5

O-Prime125 responds:

Alright bro I will reduce the volume asap, but thanks for the review once again man! :)

[|-Those Times-|]

Great!

This one is a great piece, as usual! :D
The only criticism I have is, try those panning and muting-effects on only specific instruments, because otherwise on the whole track they sound a bit too extreme and irritating. That's it, great work and keep it up! You're getting better and better.
10/10 | 5/5

O-Prime125 responds:

Thank you bro! :), and I get ya lol =)
I was just having fun experimenting with the panning haha! :L

Once again thank you, it's to all you lot who support me I get better! :)